OnionsXD's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[They hurt Flubby.]

supah

what MIGHT Not look right is the placement of the chin...but I'm not sure....maybe it should be more to the left?...I think it's fine though...amazing picture. Good background too.

Sorrygirl99 responds:

thanks~
it might be it
also the hair in the back of the head... i thought that that looked a bit off

[Box Girl]

it's great but.....

i do not like the black box....

Sorrygirl99 responds:

..... :c
i knew it.

[The Puppeteer (My own Version)]

cool

This is totlally Crazy Cakes. With capitol C's. I really like how you shade stuff...with texture...I'm suprised this didn't get any awards....but one question is to why it abruptly ends near the bottom of the picture?

[The Puppeteer's Puppet]

well....

you certainly did use the triangle compostition rule...but I think if it's gonna be a cover of a comic book it at least needs to have a background on it..Good job thoguh the char are great.

Sorrygirl99 responds:

thanks! i didn't really know what to do for a background... if you think you know a good background, could you like... draw it for me so i can use it?? o.o

[The Puppeteer]

Supah!

This is one of yer best I'd say. However your hands are WAY tiny. Youre hand extended is about as big as yer face.

Sparkeycat responds:

Thanketh thou :D

[Obey, Girl]

great JOB!

Totally awesome. I went to the art portal and was only gonna look at ONE picture. Funny how I picked one by you.

Artyluck responds:

Haha! I'm lucky! ;D Thanks Onions. :3

[My Emotions]

I give it a 9

Because it overly tries to be funny. But that's the only thing I don't like about it. The rest is sweet beans of jesus I must say. Although what would help with drawing yourself is to actually figure out how the skull works on your head and all the muscles. Don't not listen to this. If you do that you're pictures will double in quality because it'll physically make sense. Right now it doesn't. Because the lower jaw....Ah I don't know what I'm saying. Here are some good things that you could learn to be a better artist. I don't even know all of these yet but I'm working on it.
-ANATOMY
-MUSCLE ANATOMY
-COLOR THEORY
-PERSPECTIVE
-BACKGROUND TO CHARACTER THEORY
-also learn realistic way to draw people (I read that you can't really have you're own style that bends reality until you UNDERSTAND reality)
And one more thing I read somewhere that really caught my attention. It matters more WHERE you shade a picture than how MUCH you shade the picture. I hope I don't make you angry or upset I'm just trying to help ya out mate.

Cristo responds:

Anatomy, ill give it a try. Not my thing.

[The Golden Warrior Lvl 58]

It's very good!!

The shading is excellent. Although maybe the contrast between the light and dark shadings could've been a little more apart. You know like the light could've been pure white. Nonetheless though its a great picture. Nothing wrong with it at all really.

[Space Needles]

vERY GOOD

This reminds me of why I don't uch like the art portal. This right here is something you would/could see in a book of art, but yet here it's score is only 3.25. I think it's a great picture.

biscottiman responds:

y tanks!

[The Puppeteer's Prey]

SWeet beans of jesus!

This is sweepin' awesome!

The hair and hand is incredibly good. The backgrounds is cool but inda confusing but not really..... The ONLY thing that isn't too terrific is the bubble and the words but if you did this on flash then there was no other way really. Too bad flash dudn't have a word bubble feature like manga studio.... GOOD PICTURE!

Sorrygirl99 responds:

yayayayaya!
THANKS~