OnionsXD's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Skyrim: Khajiit thief]

HOt damn!

This is so funny. People say the animation is bad, but I don't think so. I think you got the timing perfectly between all the scenes to perform the max amount of humor out of the joke. Nice job! 10/10 from me. :D

haitam responds:

The animatin isn't good because I didn't inbetween.

thanks for the review ! :D

[The Bully - Vengeance]

Why only a 3.6?

This deserves well over a 4 in my opinion. It's quite sad how things get rated if theyre not a parody or have some other kind of referential humor. :/

But that aside I really enjoyed this. The linework in most parts is phenominal. I suggest you keep it like how it was in the begginning. That makes the cartoon look really awesome. I hope to see more by you in the future! Good luck tooning! :D

[Carnivorous Sharks?]

the problem with this is,..

It was all one scene. Pretty boring in that respect.

Also, the character had very small or no eyes at all. So they seemed to not have any personality. Which results in them not being interesting. I'm still watching it as I write this review. and DANG it's STILL zooming in on his face? It's overdone. Sorry.

[Mega Man Short Blast]

Great job!

I guess I don't know a whole lot about mega man, as I wasn't able to follow all of this. but I did find it entertaining, and even laughed at a few parts. Particularly the head, and the end part with the hotdog. The hotdog was funny because I myself have a hotdog character. XD

Except his eyes are on the buns. lol

The voice acting was great too. EyesAdrift is pretty dang good. :P
He voices for one of my characters too.

Overall awesome animation. high fives*

kalabor106 responds:

Thanks. The hotdog was sort of a random push over from the Sonic cartoon. funny you have one too. I'll have to find it see how it looks. EyesAdrift is great to work with, and is pretty good.

[Cristo's Halloween]

Well

It's been almost a week since we uploaded our Halloween cartoons. And I still haven't figured out why people didn't like them. For the most part at least.

I realized with mine the concept or story was odd, had no flow, or resolution.
And although I don't know for sure about yours, that might be the same for you. Because, I mean, it was just what happened to them on Halloween. No real story structure, I guess we'll really have to work harder on our scripts from now on.

Aside from that, the ONLY things I could think of for improving this, is to cut the pauses out. You still had a few pauses here and there between lines. I only realize after watching it about a dozen times though (cuz I really wanted to figure out why it wasn't successful)

And the mouths. You said theyre off because off lag. That's not it. You had the mouths off a little bit. Just a hair though, and that really sucks because that something that coulda been easily fixed. ):

If you hate doing mouths so much though, and since you always keep the mouth in the same position all the time. You should really re-use mouths. Create a bunch of mouth movieclips and make them all the same size then it's way easier to do lip syncing.

That's really ALL I can think of to improve on this. Concept, lip syncing, pauses, and maybe adding more music and sound effects. But heck, this IS good it should of won a trophy. Stupid newgrounds. >.>

[SWEET GRIM]

Completely

And epicly awesome. I loved the animation style. and the grim reaper was a really likeable character. Very well designed etc.

I especially laughed at the kid that was dressed as naruto, because that's what I dressed as for halloween. :P

[American Pokemon]

As I was watching this..

I was horrified to think that most people on newgrounds would find this funny.
Luckily though, after I looked down to see that most people agree that this humor is pretty dang bad.

The humor is actually SO bad in this. I almost want to really dislike you. But that's not fair I guess, and unneccessary too.

Overall the art was pretty good, although since I could do that well too, it wasn't really amazing to me. The voices weren't bad either. So pretty much, the only horrid thing was the concept, which was very horrid.

And if your going to disagree with me and call me a hipster prick or something like theweebl does, then just don't even respond. But I do ask that you take what I say into consideration, then go home, sit down, and come up with some REAL humor.

Good day to you sir~

[The VietNAM Rap Project]

Gosh SO many mouths!

Hot damn, that's a lot of mouths to draw!! Haha

I might've drawn that much in my past animations, though I've never taken the time to count.
Having said that, the way you do mouths is pretty interesting and unique! Although eventually frame by frame might bore you out. It did with me, and I do about half reusing mouths and have frame by frame.
Also, your mouth syncing is superb, I think it'd be even better looking if you made chins go down with the talking as well. it's a pain though, as I have to do that with my Kolawskum characters who has a beak..thing. lol XD

The backgrounds were nice and simple, and I liked the colors you used.

Overall pretty awesome! And interesting enough to watch the whole way through so nice job! :D

CaseyAnimates responds:

Thanks a bunch, Onions!

I was absolutely DREADING the mouths by the way.
I animated all the motions first, and then I was like, "...crap wait, people have mouths. Kill me."

[Missingno Don't Save Etc.]

Pretty good.

At the start I didn't think this was going to be funny. But I did laugh a few times. Great job. The ending was a little abrupt, but that's ok. XD

[Cliff Shenanigans]

Pretty good!

This is quite good bro!

what's really lacking in this animation is sound effects. More of them woulda been great. especially at the part where he shook his head, I expected him to say something like no nono no nono. but nothing. :/

Also, the linework I noticed when he caught the branch and looked up was a little scruffy.

but that's all I can see that could use imrovement.
Nice job overall though! It made me laugh.

fluffkomix responds:

Yeah sound effects were my biggest problem in this, i couldn't find the right ones in time and couldn't combine them well enough in time to submit, but i wanted some form of audio cue

the reason the animation is scruffy is because i animated teh whole body at a certain view, then moved it all into a symbol and zoomed it in, so you get to see stuff you wouldn't normally see at 100 percent magnification