OnionsXD's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Quincy]

moo

I have a couple questions...

How does this only have 2,000 views and FP? I'm guessing the icon is unattractive.
And how does it get FP about 20 days after you submitted it?
The cartoon was okay. I didn't laugh but the guy rolling was pretty well. But again the perspective was off. and shading would help a little bit.

fluffkomix responds:

well thats just the way the cookie crumbles.

now since the race had no apparent prize, i get bragging rights :D

also it had 400 or so views before it got front paged.

[2009 Robin (a short film)]

SWEET BEANS OF JESUS!!

That was good better than what I was expecting it to be.

"for my mother"
for some reason that made me laugh lol I don't know why.....
The pace of it was a little slow and to tell the truth I thought it was gonna be over when it said Robin a short story..... good art too it... ha I liked the top hats on the birds! :D

DevintheDinosaur responds:

Wow thanks dude! Glad you liked it!@

8D

[A FBF Animation.]

INSANE!

Ha I really like the music it was very fitting. The drawings weren't too bad either. Only thing I'd suggest is to have a higher frame rate... at least 20 anything lower is to slow. Great Job!! :D

ForNoReason responds:

Yeah, the frame rate was an after thought saddly =p. I will not make the same mistake twice! Thanks man! You are great.

[Here Goes Nothing!]

Pretty good!!

TOTALLY RANDOM! HA HA XD

Graphics were immensely shaded which was very nice, most I've seen shaded on a flash... lip syncing was good too but could use some improvement..Taking lines from video games and mixing them to make a script must've been kinda hard to make up. and even harder to make it make sense. The Humor too it wasn't the best and I didn't find it much funny EXCEP the end when you got the achievement. I laughed at that part. Just as a lil' comment I'm the 1,000 viewer on this!! ha ha :D

- Good Luck with Flash in the future!! :D

Sabtastic responds:

The lip sync was what I had the most trouble with! :P ...I don't like the frame-by-frame version of lip-syncing. I know there's a couple other ways to do it, but I'm not aware of how to! D:>

I wish I knew how to stretch and skew shapes so that they would sort of morph into eachother, kind of like what the really good flash artists on NG can do.

But, alas! *dramaface*
Oh - grats on the 1,000th view, too!!

[Bloody Bye]

crazy cakes

very good. but why was it in japanese? or not english? I'm just guessing it was japanese....

Artyluck responds:

It was russian. :P

[Mindbation]

pretty good for five hours

short but pretty good for only done in five hours. you must animate pretty darn fast..lol

Artyluck responds:

Yeah, I am. Ha! :D

[Lily on the Phone]

crAZEH cAKES! bEANS!!!

pretty good. You're getting better at flash and it's nice to see that you added color. :)
Graphics were awesome tons of shading which was nice but the ending kinda ruined it. Ya it probably gets annoying to hear that in all the reviews lol.

But what you need to work on is lip synching a little bit, it was okay but could've been better. And backgrounds were usually plain blue so work on that too. DOn't rush backgrounds cuz' people can tell when you do and backgrounds are important.What you might want to study though is writing the script or whatever or filling characters with a personality and get it to where the audience has feelings for them. I'm working on this too and it's hard but is kinda required to make a good flash or series whatever. Nice to see you making flashes again and I hope to see more from you soon! ;}P

Sorrygirl99 responds:

i never stopped...
but thanks for leaving this LONG review so i can waist another... 3 minutes of my life... reading it...
ya.. the end did ruin it... SHUT UP!
I already know that... STOP TELLING ME THAT PEOPLE!
I got the memo... like... HOURS ago... and i dont have THAT bad of memory...
gawd.... >.>

[Luigi's Space Machine]

.........

I found this by searching "kos"

Bomber109 responds:

Good for you...

Don't bring your disappointment to me.

[A Pwanchi Halloween 2]

not so good

This wasn't too good. The style I didn't much prefer and it didn't seem very creative. The length was WAY too long and you lip synching WASN"T the best. actually you focused way too much on the shading on no attention to the actual animation. Your tweens and stuff were off too. I think you could do a lot better if you would write a better story and focus more on animation.

cyotecody555 responds:

I like cheese